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That is fine
There are a few typing errors (but frankly my own typing is bad) but essentially is is polite low key and conciliatory - while still making your position clear
Personally I would start it with a more formal Dear Ms xxx but then again I am old!
I prefer your first letter.
There is no point in raising the issue of parentage until the child is born and a DNA test can be done