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Dear Customer,

The text you have above is all that you need to have proofread, or do you require more text to be proofread?

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Customer reply replied 9 months ago
hi, I need to proofreading this right now. thank you!

Dear Customer,

Just a moment. I will work on it right now for you. Please do not forget to rate me or I will not be paid by you.

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Customer reply replied 9 months ago
I thought you are working on it already. I just need the proofreading.

Dear Customer,

Please go with this below:

Hi, thanks for your message and to let me know to remove this number xxx-xxx-xxxx from your telephone contact list. This number was showing as your mobile number and I will make sure to remove and enter this number as your contact number if needs, otherwise will email you.

Please rate me so that I can be paid. Thank you and I greatly appreciate your business in advance.

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As an alternative to the suggestion by Ms. Kakange, you do not want to use the passive voice (to let, to remove). Also, the last phrase is awkward (if needs, otherwise will email you). Here is my suggestion for a rewrite.

Hi, thank you for letting me know you want xxx-xxx-xxxx removed from your telephone contact list as your mobile number. I will remove the number and enter it as your contact number. Alternately, I will email you.

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Customer reply replied 9 months ago
hi Donna, can i need this proofreading as well. I will close this page for a some proofreading. thank you.hi, we have company festival this coming Sunday from 1-5pm. doing this event they might give out some small gift, like t-shirt, hat or .....lot of fun for the kids too. please let me know if you are interesting to come so i need to register for headcount.

Dear Customer,

I can do it once you pay for the first one and accept this offer.

Thank you. It would be my pleasure. I can have it completed for you within about 30 minutes maximum even less once you accept the offer and pay for the first one.

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Customer reply replied 9 months ago
for Cher to continue proofreading. i just had a chance to check the transaction. do you want me to transfer you back the money or you want to save it for next month. are you talking the small window close to the street side? that one they don't usually open so no screen. but, if you want, jon will install for you later.
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Hi again, Judy and thanks for requesting me.

I believe I did the one about the festival on your other thread; if not, please let me know and I will do it here.

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I just had a chance to check the transaction. Do you want me to transfer the money back to you, or you want to save it for next month?

Are you referring to the small window, closest to the street side? If so, that one is usually not opened, so it doesn't have a screen; however, if you'd like one, Jon will install it for you later.

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Hi,

Thanks for your message and letting me know you would like to remove this number xxx-xxx-xxxx from your telephone contact list. This number was showing as your mobile number and I will make sure to remove it and enter the number you requested, as your contact number, if needed; otherwise, I will email you.

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Hi,

We have a company festival, this coming Sunday, from 1-5pm. During this event, they might give out some small gifts, like t-shirts, hats or other items; it will be lots of fun for the kids too! Please let me know if you are interested in coming, because I need to register a headcount.

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Customer reply replied 9 months ago
went to company festival on tge past weekend- we had a blast day
Customer reply replied 9 months ago
Hi Cher, just sent you prooofreading request

Hi, Judy.

My apologies; I just signed on a short while ago. Thank you for your patience! Here is your proofreading:

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Went to the company festival this past weekend--we had a blast!

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Customer reply replied 9 months ago
Hi Cher, can i say " we had blast day"?
Hi, I don't know if you still remember that before you off for serverall weeks i mentioned that I got 8 hours shorts from my paycheck I think the 8/5 one. and you said you will put it back on the next pay check, but I don't think they did. Could you follow up for me. thank you
I think you past out the t-shirt yesterday, can I have one I was not here yesterday.
Customer reply replied 9 months ago
Hi, when you parking on last space, could you try to park more close to the drive way or little over the driveway that way we could save for two spaces for the others to park as well. that's what we usually do for everyone. The window screen probably install next week. thank you!
Customer reply replied 9 months ago
One of my colleage was talking about the Mexico earthquake she feels so worry that's one in here since we closed to Mexico and the bible has been predict that's big earthquake in here. She was asking where to escape if there really one then the other co-worker said this building was builed after 1989's big earthquake and they were put something under the ground that should be prevent, so it release the worries of us. i think we all may need to prepare for the next earthquke coming or treat your neighbors good.

Hi, Judy.

I was offline when you posted. Thanks for your patience!

I'm working on your proofreading, now.

No, it would not be grammatically correct to say, "We had a blast day." You could say, for example: "The day was a blast" or "We had a blast on that day!" However, also, because you mentioned the festival was on the 'weekend,' which is made up of TWO days, IF it took place on both days of the weekend, you can't use 'day.' I would leave it at "we had a blast!" which I first suggested. Let me know if you want it expressed differently.

I'll get back to you, shortly, with the rest of your proofreading.

Thanks,

Cher

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Hi,

I don't know if you still remember that before you were off for several weeks, I mentioned that I was 8 hours short in my paycheck; I think it was the one from 8/5. You said you would put it back on the next paycheck, but I don't think they did. Could you please follow up on this for me. Thank you.

I think you passed out the t-shirts yesterday; can I have one? I was not here yesterday.

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Hi,

When you park in the last space, could you try to park closer to the driveway or little over the driveway, as that way, we could save two spaces for the others to park, as well; that's what we usually do for everyone. The window screen will probably be installed next week. Thank you!

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One of my colleagues was talking about the Mexico earthquake; she feels so worried that there will be one here, since we're close to Mexico and the bible has been predicting that 'big earthquake,' here. She was asking where to escape if there really was one, then the other co-worker said this building was built after 1989's big earthquake and they put something under the ground, that should be preventative, so it eased the worries for us. I think we all may need to prepare for the next earthquake coming, and treat your neighbors well.

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Customer reply replied 9 months ago
there were so many countries got earthquake today at Japan 6.1, Indonesia, Chili
Customer reply replied 9 months ago
Hi Cher, how' things in your hometown now?
if you still here today could you prrofreafing the upon request?

Hi, Judy.

My apologies; I was out, earlier. Tonight is a religious holiday for me. Everything is fine in my hometown now, except grocery stores are still not fully stocked, but day by day, it's getting better. We have no problem finding food--it may not be our usual brand, etc., but it's food! lol Thanks for asking!

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There were so many countries that had earthquakes today: Japan 6.1, Indonesia, Chile.

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Customer reply replied 8 months ago
Hi Cher, yge festival was last weekend, but only on Sunday so can i say we have a blast day? or no?

Hi, Judy.

Yes, if the festival was only on one day, Sunday, it's perfectly fine to say 'We had a blast!' You can't add 'day' to that; it's not correct, grammatically. If you want to say something like, "We had a blast on that day! (or on Sunday)."

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Customer reply replied 8 months ago
got it, thanks Cher.
need proofreading for this: out of sick on that day, didn't receive pay for that day.
missing payment for this sick day

You're welcome, Judy.

I was out sick on that day, and didn't receive payment for it.
Also, missing payment for this sick day.

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Judy, were you referring to one sick day or two different ones? It was confusing. It would be best to include the date(s). Please let me know and I can change it, if necessary.

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Hi, Judy.

I hope all is well!

Can you please close out this question by rating and then, open a new one requesting me, when you're ready?

Thanks so much,

Cher

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Customer reply replied 8 months ago
pt walked in with his bp machine. checked his bp was 99/47 pulse and his bp machine 113/56 pulse: 54
pt wants to know if he needs to adjust his bp medicine.
doing the outreach call i do have one case to share: Called pt, when he pick it up the phone and I introduce myself then he will just hung up the phone, so I spoke to his wife, the wife said his dm is getting worse and he is bioplar, denied any medicine, pt's wife said because pt always think that the doctor will ask him to do kidney wash that he doesn't wanted to do it. I asked the wife where he get that information from, he has DM and it's better to check it and keep maintain it. Pt 's wifi said she will comfort him and call back. I received his wife call and wife dissappointted pt's behavior, did not accomodate, denies to see doctor or telephone apptand become very moody, So what should we do for this pt.
Customer reply replied 8 months ago
Hi Cher, sorry I didn't see your request to ask me to close the page. I am close it now and re-open other one.

No problem, Judy and thanks for the great rating!

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Judy, you're forgetting to begin your new questions with my name, so other experts are answering. On the new one, now, could you please type in the reply box--"This question is for Cher only"

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Customer reply replied 8 months ago
i though i already opened you new page

Yes, you did open a new page for me and that's where you posted your last proofreading and where I sent it. Check your new page and I will close this one.

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