Really, impressed with your reply to my question regarding response to a woman's online profile.
Sure. I would say something like....thank god I found a woman who is looking for something deeper. Friends with benefits can be just so boring. :-) I am looking for the complete package...let's grab some dinner and see how we connect. Looking forward. The Cheeky one! :-)
I would be very great full, if you would consider re- writing my online profile.
I really liked the narrative of you reply it sounded great. My profile is total opposite really dull my friends wife wrote it for me, She said my profile wasn't very good, which I agree with but I think hers was even worse than mine! I've only had one positive response from it in about 9 months.
This is my current profile
"Curious about the world, and looking for partner who shares my zest for trivia
I like to tinker with things. In the last week, I've fixed a friend's computer, sold a few chili plants, made way for courgettes in the summer, tried to figure out linear regression, ran 5 miles, and lunched on the stray while my friend's little boy learned to ride his bike. I'm looking for someone who appreciates the little stuff of life and wants to explore the possibilties with me, laughing most of the way! I'm happiest in a relaxed casual environment, love Italian food and wine, and exploring Yorkshire."
It seems to be very dull and uninteresting, over specific, and very seasonal I would of thought something more general appeal you seem to have a very intuitive way of writing, I like all the standard stuff?
I know it's a tough challenge CoachjenK but If you think you can help? Just let me know what fee you would be happy with, not sure how you are remunerated through the site? But would be happy to arrange something that was acceptable to you !