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Could you help me with the flow of this statement With

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With reserve, I will be silence about my constituents concerns about political grandstanding. Given the history in the community about the failure to sit at the table and review facts openly with a civilian review board due to due legal process, I will hold my peace. I support the truth in love. It concerns me when this is not permitted
Hello and thank you for allowing me the opportunity to assist you.

I would alter it as such:

"With reserve, I remain silent as to allegations of political grandstanding. Given the community's history of failing to review facts openly with a civilian review board pursuant to due process, I will hold my peace. I support the truth in love, and I am concerned when this is not permitted."

The above is more concise. However, I don't quite understand the last sentence (though I probably don't need to understand it).

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