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Question for Homework Girl - On CBG on the "Current Oil Projects" page - what would be a better intro paragraph than:

As our partnership develops we will update this section with the various opportunities we have available. Below are the details of our "Phase 1" project. Thank you for your interest.

We're not longer calling it "Phase 1" and I completely do not like the style AT ALL of what has been written. I want it to sound welcoming, professional, and begin trying to 'connect' with the investors that are going to be viewing the website. Also we will not be updating that page as mentioned. So I'll need something completely new. Any ideas are welcome! Thanks.

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