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I got the notes below from a recruiter and I'd like you to

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I got the notes below from a recruiter and I'd like you to review and provide any input you feel necessary before I send my response back. Also, attaching my resume if your system allows it.
==================================================================================Thank you for taking time to consider Raytheon SAS for a new career opportunity. We have received your resume for 116208BR. In order to facilitate our process, could you please answer the following questions:1. Why are you currently looking?
I am seeking a salary position in an organization such as yours as I believe I can add value.
2. What are your salary expectations/requirements? Base range is fine.
85k to 105k based on my experience
3. Do you have a minimum of 2 years of relevant operations experience in a manufacturing setting?
Yes My experience exceeds 15 years
4. Do you have experience with lean implementation and information technology systems? Please explain.
Yes, staff reductions, elimination of non-value added operations, area reorganization - 5S, employee engagement, and cross training
5. Do you have strong leadership, problem solving, and project management skills?
Yes, my leadership style has allowed me to promote safety resulting in no lost time accidents, reduce defects, meet customer schedule, significantly improve customer satisfaction, improve product cycle time, organize teams, provide mentoring and coaching, and develop metrics that help drive results of cost reduction. I've work with cross functional teams to deliver on projects that impacted overall organizational results.
6. Are you open to a 2nd shift?Yes, any shift you have available would be fine.8. Position requires U.S. Citizenship.
I am a U.S. citizen and I can bring proof to an interview upon request.
After receiving your response, I will continue to review your application and discuss with the hiring manager. You will be contacted if there is additional interest to schedule an interview. Thanks!Bridgitte Ballard
Raytheon SAS Talent Acquisition
Submitted: 4 months ago.
Category: Email
Expert:  bbao replied 4 months ago.

It fine for me except below two sections. Please see my suggestions below.

4. Do you have experience with lean implementation and information technology systems? Please explain.
Add specific years for your experience again above two points, plus specific position name, respectively.

5. Do you have strong leadership, problem solving, and project management skills?

Add specific previous positions against the three points above, one by one, respectively.