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Need help to rewrite classification essay

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Need help to rewrite classification essay
Submitted: 1 year ago.
Category: Writing Homework
Expert:  LoriHR replied 1 year ago.

Hi, Kay, I'm happy to assist with your classification essay. Do you have the essay that you would like to send to me to work with?

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
I have attached 3 copies the instruction, essay in pdf and the original essay .Once you are finished with this essay I will send you another one
Expert:  LoriHR replied 1 year ago.

Perfect--thank you!

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
Hi loriHR
Received an email from you saying it is ready I do not see anything post here.
Expert:  LoriHR replied 1 year ago.

Hi, Kay--I'm not sure why you received that message...I am still working on your essay revisions. I'm a little stumped on one aspect of it. The professor said that there are many instances of incorrectly cited (plagiarized) areas in the paper. They are not all marked. The two or so that are marked are not the same sources that you have given in your Works Cited. There are no parenthetical citations, so it's really difficult for me to tell what information needs to be cited and given special attention as far as changing the wording completely to avoid plagiarism. Do you have links to the sources in your Works Cited, so I can read through those and compare to the information in your essay? That may help. Thanks.

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
no do not have the links.
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
the essay need to be rewrite from scratch
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
the essay paper I send you was to show the mistakes made.
Expert:  LoriHR replied 1 year ago.

Okay, I misunderstood your request. I thought I was correcting and editing--re-writing--what you had already written, rather than writing a new essay. I can write a new, custom essay, but I do charge more for that service. It would be a $20 bonus, if that is acceptable. If this is not okay, I completely understand and apologize for the misunderstanding. Just let me know and I can opt out immediately to open the question up to other experts.

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
can it be corrected?
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
if yes please to do so
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
The due date for the essay is October 19.
Expert:  LoriHR replied 1 year ago.

I would need to be able to link the information in your paper to the right sources, and I need the links to cite those properly. If you did not use those sources, if you could provide me with the links to the sources you did use, that should work.

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
let me recheck and get back to you
Expert:  LoriHR replied 1 year ago.

Thank you!

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
http://dogtime.com/dog-breeds/dachshundhttp://www.yourpurebredpuppy.com/reviews/dachshunds.html
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
I got most of the information from the links above and some from work cite on the paper
Expert:  LoriHR replied 1 year ago.

Okay, thank you. I will see what I can do with this information. I should be able to take care of this by the 19th with no problem. :)

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
hi lorHR
are you still working on the essay?
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
The deadline for the essay is today. I have not heard from you at all
Expert:  Brittany replied 1 year ago.

Hello Kay, I am sorry that you did not get your answer on time. I probably cannot complete this tonight but I can have it for you tomorrow. I would just need access to some information. Is this for Penn Foster? I can access the files above so that should be all I need and it does appear to be Penn Foster so I am familiar with this classification and division essay and it is extremely hard. Please, let me know if you still need assistance and if you can get an extension through tomorrow. The sooner I hear from you the better so I have time to get started. Thank you!

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
Hi BrittanyYes, it is Penn foster. Good to hear you are familiar with this classification and division essay. I still need assistant, can you get it done by tomorrow?
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
if I can get it today that would be great!
Expert:  Brittany replied 1 year ago.

Thank you! I am working on it now and will have it posted this evening. Do you by chance have the outline that you used. It is usually due before the essay. I just want to see what information from the essay came from the outline and what the instructors comments were on the outline so I can incorporate that into the final essay. Thanks

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
I have the instructor comments on the essay
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
hope this will help
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
Expert:  Brittany replied 1 year ago.

Thank you! I am almost done. I have about 750 words right now. I know they do not like it when you use references on this assignment so I am trying to develop characteristics based on common knowledge. Your essay shows that you have this breed of dog so you are likely to know more about them than I do so I am trying to throw characteristics into the paragraphs that would not require references. I also want to make sure I have all three characteristics for each body paragraph. I will post it for you shortly :)

Expert:  Brittany replied 1 year ago.

Hello Kay, Here is a link to where you can download the file: Please click here

I will also send the web page just in case the link does not work:

http://www.mediafire.com/view/z19wgzje0l4totc/Studentnumber_Examnumber_Lastname.rtf

I hope you have found my work to be excellent. Let me know if you have any trouble downloading the document. I sent it with the Penn Foster heading and titled it with the Penn Foster file name title for you to fill in with your information and sent it as a rich text which is the format that Penn Foster requests. Let me know if you need anything :) Thank you, Brittany

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
once I have download it and review I will rate your service
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
Brittany I notice there is no work cite where did you get information from?
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
most of the essay seem plagiarism
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
I need help to correct my mistakes not to make more. this essay is not completed
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
hi Brittany please open the essay to another expert
Expert:  Brittany replied 1 year ago.

Hello, if you read your instructions from the study guide and the instructors comments, it states that this is not a research paper and they do not recommend references but if you do choose to use them then you need to cite and reference in APA format. All information I included is general knowledge of someone who knows dogs. I have included only characteristics that someone who owns one of these dogs would state about the dog and nothing that is plagiarized or taken from someone's words. Everything is my own words, my own opinions, and my own knowledge of the breed.

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
please open the essay question
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
please open the essay to another expert
Expert:  Brittany replied 1 year ago.

Good luck! Please do not submit my essay as I have uploaded it to Writepoint and it will now be flagged as plagiarism if your instructor runs it through the plagiarism checker.

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
why would I want to use your essay which is plagiarism!!!
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
just open up the question!!
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
open the essay to another expert
Expert:  Brittany replied 1 year ago.

The question is already open to others. It was just a warning and there is absolutely no plagiarism in that paper. I have been doing this for 7 years and have my degrees. I know what plagiarism in unlike you which is obvious from your attempt at an essay. Again...good luck in your future education and getting your assignment completed.

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
Expert arguing with a customer!! Very bad customer service Brittany.
Expert:  Brittany replied 1 year ago.

I am not arguing. Unfortunately, every time you respond I get locked in the question and have to send a response back before I can assist my customers. The question is opened to others. Wait for a response and one may help you.

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
nonsense!!
Expert:  F. Naz replied 1 year ago.

Hello

You want me to write an essay for you as a fresh one and will I have to select a topic or you will specify one, please confirm, thanks.

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
Hi F Naz
I am not sure which essay you are referring.
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
what is the tropic of the essay you are referring there is more then one that is posted. and was close out yesterday
Expert:  F. Naz replied 1 year ago.

It means that you do not need the answer any more

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
is it for the classification essay ?
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
I still do need help with the classification essay. Are you able to access the file online?
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
Are you able to access the original essay that the instructor commented on? If yes, that is the essay I need help with
Expert:  F. Naz replied 1 year ago.

Yes, but I will need to change the topic, is it possible, please let me know, thanks.

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
I asked the instructor he said the tropic need to be the same.
Expert:  F. Naz replied 1 year ago.

Sorry, I cannot provide the answer for this one as I am out of resources, thanks.

Customer: replied 1 year ago.
no problem. thank for trying
Customer: replied 1 year ago.
I have worked with you before in the past and you have done excellent work. I guess you are really out of resources on this topic. Thanks once again for trying
Expert:  F. Naz replied 1 year ago.

I am just stuck with that topic, if the topic could be changed than I can help, sorry for the inconvenience, thanks.

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