If you want to upload the paper to media fire and post the link, I can go ahead and edit it for you. I can do it right now.
Discuss the work you completed for your client this week. Your discussion should include the principles and strategies that apply to your business and those that can apply to each member’s business.
Prepare a 350- to 1,050-word paper detailing the findings of your discussion.
The title is not consisted with the content. Do you want the title changed?
Do you want these sections reformatted and re-organized so it flows evenly?
The job analysis section is very light, yet it is one of foundations of performance analysis. Do you want me to add some depth to that section?
Some of the citations are not formatted correctly for APA style. Do you want those corrected?
This will take me 60 to 90 minutes
." Landslide Limousine is suggesting that in thefirst year they will anticipate a net revenue of $-50,000" is that supposed to be negative?
Yes please this was a group assignment and it was all over the place. yes that's negative. Ok so you'll reach back to me at 11pm est?
ok no problem
Here is the link to your revised paper http://www.mediafire.com/?gbvjff8exqo85b5bo2p34niq55pstno. The original had a mix of APA and Chicago style references and citations. since I did not know the preferred style, I just left them as is.
The title has been changed and the content has been consolidated, corrected, and organized. If you use Word, go to the review tab and chick show changes, and you can see what I did.
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