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Need help with editing a short paper ASAP.

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Need help with editing a short paper ASAP.
Submitted: 10 months ago.
Category: Writing Homework
Expert:  jadt65 replied 10 months ago.

Hi,

 

If you want to upload the paper to media fire and post the link, I can go ahead and edit it for you. I can do it right now.

 

Best,

 

Julie

Customer: replied 10 months ago.

Attachment: 2013-09-24_013901_team_a_landslide_limousine_performance_management_plan.docx

I need to edit the duplicate responses and put in an conclusion. see below the instructions


 


 


Discuss the work you completed for your client this week. Your discussion should include the principles and strategies that apply to your business and those that can apply to each member’s business.


Prepare a 350- to 1,050-word paper detailing the findings of your discussion.

Expert:  jadt65 replied 10 months ago.

Hi,

 

The title is not consisted with the content. Do you want the title changed?

 

Do you want these sections reformatted and re-organized so it flows evenly?

 

The job analysis section is very light, yet it is one of foundations of performance analysis. Do you want me to add some depth to that section?

 

Some of the citations are not formatted correctly for APA style. Do you want those corrected?

 

This will take me 60 to 90 minutes

 

 

." Landslide Limousine is suggesting that in the
first year they will anticipate a net revenue of $-50,000"
is that supposed to be negative?

Customer: replied 10 months ago.

Yes please this was a group assignment and it was all over the place. yes that's negative. Ok so you'll reach back to me at 11pm est?

Expert:  jadt65 replied 10 months ago.
I will do my best. that gives me 30 minutes to do at least 90 minutes of work.
Customer: replied 10 months ago.

Ok thanks

Expert:  jadt65 replied 10 months ago.
I am working on this still. I need about 15-20 more minutes.
Customer: replied 10 months ago.

ok no problem

Expert:  jadt65 replied 10 months ago.

Hi,

 

Here is the link to your revised paper http://www.mediafire.com/?gbvjff8exqo85b5bo2p34niq55pstno. The original had a mix of APA and Chicago style references and citations. since I did not know the preferred style, I just left them as is.

 

The title has been changed and the content has been consolidated, corrected, and organized. If you use Word, go to the review tab and chick show changes, and you can see what I did.

 

Please let me know if you need any clarifications. If not, please accept this answer and rate my service.

 

Best,

 

Julie

 

*** This is a one time download link. Please remember to save the doc when you download

 

 

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