1.Give a reason for the description. For example, if you are going to describe a coffee shop, you could recommend the coffee shop to others and describe its appearance, menu, service, etc. Use words that help your reader imagine what the coffee shop is like. If you choose to describe an unusual student or coworker, explain the reason for your description. For example, My coworker, Mary, may look like ordinary person, but she is quite remarkable. Here you might describe the way Mary looks ordinary and then describe those characteristics that make her remarkable.2.Write a minimum of 100 words.3.Use words that create an image in the reader's mind.4.Use spellchecker.5.Review your writing for run-on sentences. Review the comma rules and make sure you have put commas in the right places.6.You can make your paragraph funny or entertaining.I look forward to reading your assignments.Choose from any of the following general topics or college- and work-related topics to write your description paragraph. Choosing a topic that is of interest or a topic that may be difficult for you to write about is a good way to challenge your writing skills.
Hi. Thanks for your question. It sounds like you need a descriptive paragraph. Do you have a list of topics to choose from?Kind regards,Susan
yes ,An Evening out.
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Thanks very much!I've provided a custom-written sample descriptive paragraph below. If you're happy with my answer, please provide positive feedback so I can get credit for my work..Kind regards,SusanThe restaurant looks like a hole-in-the-wall from the outside. Actually, it looks like a dump on the inside, too. My friend looks at me as if to say, "THIS is your favorite restaurant?!" The industrial tile floor is dirty; the white metal-and-plastic tables are cheap and flimsy and aren't even dressed up with a tablecloth. The menus are laminated with plastic and are clearly years old, and the entire place looks sad and neglected. But the smells filling the room are incredible: rich, meaty, and full. The Turkish Kitchen specialises in lavash bread, which is a bread filled with savory fillings. Behind the counter, the chef pulls out a smoking hot bread from the oven on a wooden paddle. It goes onto a tray, and the waitress slides it onto our table. It's almost too hot to touch, but we rip into the bread with our hands anyway; the fragrant steam rises from it. Inside the golden, crusty outside is a heaping pile of ground chicken laced with spices, raisins, currants, and juicy chunks of apple. I take a bite, and it's just as I expected, soft and chewy on the inside, but with the crunch of crusty bread. I look at my friend, and see from the look on her face that it might just be her favorite restaurant now too.
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first draft of your paragraph. Still in the same documents, write your revised draft (you should show two different versions of the paragraph).
Hi. Thanks for question. I would have written it differently if I'd known you needed two versions. Below please find a sample rough draft. The original sample I gave you is a good example of what a final version should look like.Kind regards,SusanThe restaurant looks terrible on the outside and even worse when you go in. My friend can't believe this is my favorite restaurant. There's dirt all over the floor and the tables are made of cheap white plastic. There's no tableclothes either. The plastic menus look as old as the rest of the restaurant and there's no way it looks like a place you'd want to eat in. The first word you think of to describe it is "sad". It smells incredible though: rich and meaty. The Turkish Kitchen specialises in lavash bread which is filled with different fillings. The chef is behind the counter. He pulls a hot bread out of the oven using a wooden paddle, then puts it onto a tray, and the waitress brings it to our table. It's really hot but we rip into the bread with our hands anyway. Steam rises from it. Inside the golden, crusty outside of the bread is a filling of ground chicken, spices, raisins, currants, and apple. I take a bite and it's soft and chewy on the inside but with the cruch of crusty bread on the outside. I think it's my friend's favorite restaurant now, too.