Good evening! I can help you out with your legal question tonight. While we can't draft it for you, we can help you with verbiage that needs to be in it. What are you assigning?
this is Nancy. You actually helped me on that assignment. the instructor did not provide specific information I will e-mail you the assignment and copy and paste his comments
Your paper (excluding the title page and references) is 2 pages long. It is considered appropriate. You also have two citations, both are from SAMSHA. It is considered not really sufficient to have only 2 citations.
There are a few major problem in this paper:
1) You should divide the paper into different sub-segment as indicated, such as: Description of the issue; Purpose of the study; Significance of the study; Data set to be used for data analysis. You open the paper with introduction of SAMSHA studies, without even explain drug abuse is a problems or lack of treatment facilities is a main issues. There should be some more general opening statement about "description of the issues"
2) What is the significance of the study? After reading your paper a few times, I still cannot see it (or at least, it is not described clearly)
3) The same, what is the purpose of the study? You have a data, you write a lot about this data. However, I am not sure what is your research plan with this dataset.
Dependent variables: (Types of) treatment facilities, I assumed.
Independent variables: Unclear -
Content: 54 (It is definitely only in "fair" category. Many required parts are missing, or buried under your description of SAMSHA study)
Writing: 25 (Your writing is fine. However, with only 2 citations - and both are about the dataset you will use- It is not as described as in the rubric as "Paper contains multiple, appropriate and exemplary sources expected/required for the assignment." to be considered excellent.)
i need a hypothesis, i guess with all the corrections he mentioned
here is the rubic for the assignment
The Introduction to your research manuscript (2-3 pages) is due by Day 7. Your Introduction should include the following:
Note: Your topic must be based on the available data. For example, your topic can not be on adolescent alcohol use unless you have access to a data set on adolescent alcohol use.
this whole assignment is the first building block towards writting a manuscript for research! the next assignment is to develop a matrix for 10 peer reviewed articles to support the hypothesis. the last paragraph is my explanation to you about the assignment and not his, which we all knew about after submission
can you plz unlock it . I am sorry i did not have a print out , i needed unlocked for awhile