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Can you help me with the teachers edits on the essay. This

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Can you help me with the teachers edits on the essay. This was my first draft after you had made the outline. I need 2 more sources and more evidence. As well, the thesis needs work.
Submitted: 6 months ago.
Category: Long Paper (3+ pages)
Expert:  Donna Kakonge replied 6 months ago.

Dear Fire Bird,

I can help you with this. It does look as though you are off to a great start with the essay. When is your deadline?

Kindest regards,

Donna Kakonge, BJ, MA, TESOL, LLB, ABD

Customer: replied 6 months ago.
Could you have it back within a couples days to a week?
Expert:  Donna Kakonge replied 6 months ago.

Dear Fire Bird,

Yes, I can. Thank you for giving me so much time. I have it completed it no more than six days. I will make note of that right now.

Thank you,

Donna

Expert:  Donna Kakonge replied 6 months ago.

Dear Fire Bird,

I believe this is OK now. I also added another source and more information. I am ready to be rated.

Kindest regards,

Donna

Customer: replied 6 months ago.
I'm not sure where you made edits, but by looking at the thesis it is the same, and parts where the teacher stated to give more examples are the same. Are you sure you understood the work to help correct what the teacher was needing? Attached is the document again.The question was "Can you help me with the teachers edits on the essay. This was my first draft after you had made the outline. I need 2 more sources and more evidence. As well, the thesis needs work. "
Customer: replied 6 months ago.
Please reassign to another teacher, even you source was wrong. That had nothing to do with the paper.
Expert:  Donna Kakonge replied 6 months ago.

Dear Fire Bird,

That is fine. I will opt out of your assignment.

Kindest regards ***** ***** you for saying please :-),

Donna

Expert:  Dr. Wilson replied 6 months ago.
Hello this is Dr. Wilson. I can assist. By when is this due?
Expert:  Dr. Wilson replied 6 months ago.

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