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I'm wondering if you would want to write the essay

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Hi - I'm wondering if you would want to write the essay associated with the outline that you completed. I've attached the info regarding the essay.thank you
Submitted: 9 months ago.
Category: Long Paper (3+ pages)
Expert:  lkhoward replied 9 months ago.

Hi and thanks for requesting me. I have one ahead of you but when I'm done in a few days I'd be happy to help you. When is this due?

Expert:  lkhoward replied 9 months ago.

Has an annotated bib been done yet?

Customer: replied 9 months ago.
It would be the information you completed for me last week on the song "The River" - this is the essay that goes along with that information. It is due next week, end of week.
Expert:  lkhoward replied 9 months ago.

ok. i was looking at the requirements and it said an annotated bibliography. Anyway, I can def get the essay done for you. Probably by Sunday.

Expert:  lkhoward replied 9 months ago.

I forgot. I did the annotated bib. lol Sorry about that.

Customer: replied 9 months ago.
sounds great! thank you!
Expert:  lkhoward replied 9 months ago.

You are most welcome! I'll keep you posted.

Expert:  lkhoward replied 9 months ago.

doing a little bit today

Customer: replied 9 months ago.
Hi - you can wait on this. I submitted what you had completed for initial review and I got back comments today from the reviewer saying the entire work was rejected, many problems with sources, etc. I am reviewing.
Expert:  lkhoward replied 9 months ago.

uh what? That doesn't make any sense. Is it possible for me to see the returned paper with comments?

Expert:  lkhoward replied 9 months ago.

You got back the outline and annotated bib and that's where the problems were?

Customer: replied 9 months ago.
ill review and then send over to you. from my initial read - i'm a bit confused as I think the persons comments are a bit picky and don't necessarily align to the instructions that were provided - but i have to do more reviewing.
Expert:  lkhoward replied 9 months ago.

okay. I'll wait to hear from you.

Expert:  lkhoward replied 9 months ago.

If there is anything you want redone I can do that. No extra cost of course.

Customer: replied 9 months ago.
Hi - I've reviewed the comments by the tutor that reviews papers prior to submission - based on the instructions that were provided I think there are a few things that they called out as missing or not correct. Please review and let me know your thoughts. THank you!1) The outline needs to be detailed with specifics - it cannot just say "examples"
2) There is quite a bit of information and related sources to why the singer is popular (downfall, rise, etc) that is not related to this essay - this essay outline is supposed to be specific to the reason the SONG was popular, not the singer or a biography of the singer.
3) Some of the sourcing is in APA format, not MLA as required
4) Sources should be alphabetizedIt also looks like they wanted a clear thesis statement outlined at the beginning (see the first comment in the margins) which I don't see clearly called out in the instructions.
Expert:  lkhoward replied 9 months ago.

okay thanks. I'll redo in the morning.

Customer: replied 9 months ago.
Oh here are the instructions again in case they aren't still attached...thanks!
Expert:  lkhoward replied 9 months ago.

okay thank you. redoing it now.

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