Good morning! Happy to help with this. Let me take a look at it for you.
Are you by any chance able to link me to the "Successful College Writing" that the journals refer to? I've done this kind of writing before and they prefer that it engage with their text very closely. While as an English Expert I can naturally discuss the content quite easily, PF will send it back for revision if it does not engage with their content.
Okay. I have a Kindle, and I know sometimes you can share books but if this is a text it is probably not shareable. I will do the absolute best I can with my personal skill set, and hopefully that will be good enough! If it is returned for revision, you are welcome to find a few examples with "pg" numbers in your Kindle and send them to me...I can work those in as revisions and that should be sufficient. :) Thanks for checking.
Good morning! Thank you for checking in. This actually stopped showing up in my question feed, so I was not sure if I was still needed for it or not. I'm not sure what happened with that--perhaps some kind of technical glitch or time function. I have completed quite a bit of it, however, and it will not take me long to finish up for you. :)
My pleasure. :)