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Attention: Application Review Unit
I applied Management Analyst (Class Code 9184, Aka “MA”) on July 1, 2013.
I received your rejection email on July 3, 2013 with the reason: “This examination would not result in a promotion for me”.
I consider the position to be a promotion, so I shouldn't be denied the opportunity to apply for it, especially since my co-worker has been allowed to apply the same position.
First, in Department WWW, MA position’s salary is $99,072, which is a big promotion for employees with the same salary as me (TA II)
Second, I look forward for the future promotional opportunities: Senior MA/ Principal MA, etc. These are big promotions for me too.
Third, as a professional, I believe that salary is not the only concern for my career path. If you really like to do something that really interests you, you would not consider more about the pay. Per my knowledge, some of the higher level co-workers applied the other lower level jobs due to diversified personal reasons.
Fourth, I noticed that my fellow employee, who has the same title as me and higher pay, applied the same position but didn’t received rejection email like me and was given the opportunity to apply this position. I am very confused about that as it appears that I'm being treated differently than my fellow employee. Our City is an equal opportunity employer and since everyone is equal, I feel that I was singled out and judged by those factors that I can not controlled.
Last, please take into considerations of my previous working experience. I believe that I am a good fit for this position and I sincerely XXXXX XXXXX attend this examinations.