My name is ***** ***** I am a NSW Solicitor. Thank you for your question, and will do my best to assist you with your question. Please understand this is not legal advise Please understand this is not legal advise but a guide to assist you.
You cannot do this yourself.
You do not say that they are correct. You are making admissions.
The losses to the business are not the cost price but the sale price. It is not relevant if he has been reimbursed by the insurance company. If you are ordered top pay compensation that will to the insurer not the boss.
Are you intending to plead guilty? If so this should be clear and then you set out what part of the facts is wrong and ask them to be amended to show the correct facts. You do not give explanations.
You should get a solicitor that practices in criminal law to deal with this because stealing from your employer is far more serious than normal stealing.
Spend some money to make sure that you get a good result with no conviction recorded and be represented.
I would not suggest you send the submissions you have provided they are too damaging even though made without prejudice.
I hope this makes sense and is of assistance.